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Feeling the need of a the single love
I've prepared myself a sketch, clumsily,
on a May willow tree.

Then so many unknown sketches,
on a hawk, on a cloud, on a March rain.

Between number one and number two, my only infinite.
I sometimes sleep beneath the stars on a stack of hay…
My apotheosis of thoughts in which I've gathered my maturity
turbid, cold, weird it is if I am haunted by the number one,
if barren solitude I am.

Hopeless helplessness of intuiting Tomorrow's voice
you're disease, you're mistake
and non-existance, you, insipid number one sharp
over-flowing of your perfection.
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prophetofwarlock Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
I think the number one u tried to tell is the side u didn't want or wanted to have, or maybe the side of u have become but u don't wanted it? I like ur poem... It's overflowing in my head :D
Ella-Popescu Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Thank you. Glade you like*it
prophetofwarlock Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
uhhmm but is my opinion right? ur welcome btw :D?
Ella-Popescu Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2011
Every opinion it*s welcome.
smrhodes Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2010   Artisan Crafter
I think that's pretty flippidy dippidy amazing.
vampiress-chic7 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
"a single love" ? correct? and last stanza (you're a disease, you're a mistake)
(your disease, your mistake)

i like the meaning of this poem. its greatly written.
cometrider Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010   Writer
Wow. This is a really sweet, sad and hearfelt poem. The nature images were really cool though and I sort of wish you had developed them a little more...
It's still a really great poem and very easy to identify with.
bambiqueen03 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010
WHOA! that's so sad! but this is a great poem! :D great work! :)
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